robotnic

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It’s an abdication of narrative responsibility, in my view. The storyteller, in film or novel, should take charge of the story and not feel shifty about it. Put the camera in the place from which it can see the action most clearly. Make a decision about where that place is. Put it on something steady to stop that incessant jiggling about. Say what happened, and let the reader know when it happened and what caused it and what the consequences were, and tell me where the characters were and who else was present – and while you’re at it, I’d like to know what they looked like and whether it was raining.

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    I honestly like present tense, if it’s done correctly. But like Pullman points out, there are so many things to...
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    This entire quote makes no sense to me. How can you ask people to eradicate an entire tense? And how can anyone presume...
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    In my not so humble opinion, the only rule that matters about POV, tense, narrative structure, plotting or character is:...
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    I used to only use the past tense third person in my writing, and now nearly all my works are present tense (still third...
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    ———- I don’t normally write in present tense, either, but “Alone on the Water” is both first-person AND present-tense.
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    Present tense, like all the other tenses, is just another tool for storytelling, IMO. If using that tense best serves...